Hello, I played the game and wanted to know if the black screens during the protagonist's dreams are on a black screen or is it just a bug on my cell phone or the images being something made for who is a subscriber?
So, my girfriend who I recommended Uni to wanted me to ask if there will ever be a route for Levi from the Yearbook club. Tbh, I concur. He has big potential. And he already has a sprite. So, any ideas for him? Cheers
Lol. You're only ever cringe if you only ever live according to others. Levi being unapologetically true to himself and double downing on the dorkiness makes him a giga chad like no other.
Haven't made it through entirely yet, but hoping there are more lesbian options than I've gotten. Violet is an obvious option, but I'm hoping to get some lesbian scenes with Lisa, Olivia, and Tracy. Actually, any girl who has a unique appearance should have a lesbian option if I had my say, but that's probably not reasonable to ask for. But Lisa kept talking about how she likes someone who can take charge and then trying to get me to be less assertive. I'm hoping that showing her I can be dominant against her can get me some lesbian content, no manager involved. (Doesn't look like it though. I'll look up a guide after I've played through a time or two on my own to see how to get all the strictly lesbian content.)
If we had a route for every character with a unique sprite we'd never get this game finished. XD Lisa is working to corrupt you for the manager which is why she is trying to make you more submissive.
I..I am in love with this game~!! but...is it necessary to hurt damien if I wanna continure with matt? idk, Damien is such a sweetheart. I can never TT and then there is Matt, why tf is he so hot? he is the devil fr fr ><
Is it possible to have a scene recall function in the future? Many galgames have this feature, and sometimes I don't just want to view the CG, I also want to revisit the dialogue that happened during those scenes. But currently, when I want to do this, I can only save the game at each scene, which is very inconvenient.
Some H-Scene Replace they can be animated ready to watch
There's some fetish i would suggest Old man harasser contents for the city exploration dirty old man, strip club contents the female protag will be a whore she can accept money from people want H-scene,
Sex party at school CR that is really nice to see if the mc can do nasty things at CR
For pregnancy to be added in a reasonable degree of being grounded the game would be over before you'd see any physical changes. Plus, that would occur late into the game if we were to implement it.
Would it be possible to have some more threesomes? I would love to offer Damien or Kate to Dom V., or pressure Sub V. into a threesome with either of them.
Out of the main routes, Kate and Violet are both perfect in completely different ways. Heck, same with Sub V. and Dom V; also, when you go drama you absolutely nail it. I wasn't expecting the "route blocks" and they really make you feel bad for your actions.
The athetic club sub route better end in a triangle polyamorous relationship of sorts (or at least a threesome) because damn the 3 of them are fucking great. Chelsea, Goth Girl and Sports Guy are great and have had ton of build up.
The brown girl from Kenzie clique is incredible hot. Love her design and pose.
You better be able to corrupt Olivia in the cheerleader group.
Also, fuck Matt. Even if you try to make his route as consensual as possible he still is a huge asshole.
Only real complaint is that some of the writing outside of the main routes can be quite a slog. The whole deal with the lady vendor and a lot of the yearbook stuff comes off as unnecessarily long and detailed. It just makes me wish it was time and effort spent in the better aspects of the game instead. Just my opinion tho, you guys know which are your priorities and what you want for the game.
Hello bro i suggest some thrilling events like gangbang old man variants plus whore content the female protag must wearing such slutty outfit and student going to corrupt so much
fuck.. Matt's freacking hot, I been looking for something like his route for a long time. Just got up to the current end of his story and I'm not gonna lie it defenetly worth sacrificing my sleep before a long shift lol
Is MC able to date Mr. Davis and have some romantic situations with him? I love this man, he's so caring and cute ^^ While he was helping MC with her photography skills there was clearly a tension between them. But he's not listed separately in the gallery with CGs, so I wondered if it's actually possible to have a romantic and maybe sexual relationship as well with him?
Also, do you already know when is the game going to be finished? Or is it too early to ask about that 😉?
I find your game very successful, there are a few I want to say, I think the cheerleader events in this game have great potential, I have not seen anything like this in any other game. For example, adding a few gangbang events would be very good and you could do this in the script as a way to motivate men.
I mean I live in the US and it's pretty accurate, even if people get drunk in school, it doesn't mean they'll just hand alcohol to minors in this country
Someone less than 21 can procure alcohol from a particularly lax convenience store, but most liquor stores and bars card pretty hard. If someone under 21 is caught in the bar or is able to purchase liquor from the liquor store (and state liquor authorities often hire underage people specifically to catch violating bars and stores), the bar or store will lose its license to sell alcohol, so they've got a strong incentive to self police. It's totally believable to me that Chelsea couldn't get in a club (especially a strip club) without offering an ... extra benefit.
Its a fictional game so, I sort of just really don't expect anything to be like societal norms, even if the drinking age was 30 it's its own setting, comparing these kinds of games to real life isn't really the way to go, if you didn't point it out I wouldn't have even noticed
Love the game and looking forward to more updates, the violet route is great. Just wondering is there going to be anyway to get back kenzie later in the game?
Wanted to say that I'm waiting for new update I love this game so much
I enjoyed it a lot seriously thank you and I want to say that if it is possible can you adf more in violet route? And another question is that when will the next update comes out?This game is great.. I can't wait for new update
I've played this game a couple of times already but my Android phone is pretty bad and can't install the new version, is there a way to get any older versions of the game?
To save cloud space older versions get deleted since they're obsolete. Have you deleted everything Uni related before trying to install a new version? I've heard that can help sometimes.
Okay, so I've mostly finished the current content (0.44 android). Here's my final thoughts.
I understand that you want to make the endings/routes monoamorous because it means you don't have to make as much content, but honestly the way this is done in game is unrealistic. Matt should be pushing you to corrupt the girls for him, not just ntring them; Violet's treatment of Kate is completely out of character - she hates assholes, not cutiepies, and the MC isn't allowed to even try to get both of them (and the dialogue is really weird for an MC played fully as polyamorous); and Matthew and Kate should at least be amiable. Instead, somebody is made into an asshole and the game forces mono-routes for future updates even though it's not even close to done yet.
The above is also a symptom of the main issue with the game, which is a lack of interconnectivity. Romance routes are kept mostly separate outside of breakups, clubs have no relationship with the rest of the story, bakery being disconnected from the rest of the city while the cafe route bounces around the city is weird, and the absolute obliteration of Matt makes any future content with Kenzie seem non-threatening.
Some other interconnectivity or logic problems:
1. As I said before, Bakery should come directly after Cafe, this is better for the story in multiple ways.
2. There should be an option to go undercover in the bar, instead of destroying all relationships.
3. As above, choosing a relationship destroys friendships completely.
4. Even if you don't let us join multiple clubs, we should still be seeing club members out and about.
5. As suggested before, time of day for clubs should not be the same as events.
6. There should really be hints for missing scenes.
7. How the heck did Violet clean the apartment and not find the dog collar?!
8. As an addendum to #1, Kate is too much of a central character to not be accessible just because you chose Bakery. Bakery doesn't give enough content to compensate for its restrictions.
9. If a straight A student can complete homework without changing time of day, why can't it be done at night?
10. Event dialogue doesn't recognize order of events. For instance, I got with Kate before Violet, but the dialogue suggested the opposite.
11. There should be a dom/sub hybrid option for Violet.
12. Don't let your dreams be dreams.
Now, on the flipside, there's some shining gems this game has that I love.
1. No animated scenes, so dev time isn't being wasted. That's good.
2. Mia's hairstyle changing... This is great and should be done with more characters.
3. The moms are the best moms.
And now for final suggestions/critiques:
1. Personality should be tied to class introduction and Matt response, not club.
2. Goth Club, or maybe Rock Club (with goths!)
3. Club 22 should be merged with Bar or Bar with Bakery or something. Honestly Bakery being the ring front makes more sense considering the Keith's moolah.
4. Breast implants ruin athletic ability, especially during recovery. This is really something that should be done at the end of the year once clubs are over.
5. Make Matt A Good Boy Redemption Arc
6. The Rent Is Too Damn High
Overall, a really good game, but ruined at the end when the cast turn into complete assholes regardless of prior growth.
Just wanted to say that this game was awsome.... I enjoyed playing it seriously... I want more pls update this game as,soon as possible... Thx for this amazing game
I absolutely love the game, so don't take it the wrong way that I'm only giving concerns this time; I just haven't done all content yet. I've so far gotten the corruption ending and then switched to Bakery route all endings, so far with Matt and Violet.
Firstly, I understand why you had the game end on day 75, but this stopped me from seeing side story scenes I hadn't unlocked yet. It's fine to freeze the calendar if necessary instead of ending the game.
On the corruption route, there should be the option to help the police by going undercover, this way you don't lose everyone yet and can still get more of the route's content with the consequences only happening down the line.
There should be an option to stay with Matt and actually quit the Bakery. That's a fourth option the dialogue suggests that isn't actually there, and the current option (to not get the surgery) counts as the normal bakery ending before triggering the Violet-Matt event. Another possible option is to pay for the surgery yourself, even in increments.
As for the Corruption path, there isn't enough interaction with Kate. Getting the firing event and begging for your job, or getting the job back, also seems to block Kate content.
Bakery Hair: Pink should've been an option tbh
Now for my big two issues:
First, I wanted to get a Matt-Violet-MC relationship. My ideal would be to get Violet to like Matt and/or get Matt to be a better person (redeem him with my sweetness), but corrupting Violet is fine too. The issue is that despite the MC seeing Matt be sweet sometimes, he's universally made into an asshole at the end, regardless of your route, and the game forces even Sub Violet to ruin his path (dangit!). I really, really don't like irredeemable bully characters; they're just bad writing (and The Fixer did the same thing too btw), especially for Matt since he was starting to soften up.
Second, the way time management is handled could be better. Try this instead:
Weekday Dawn: School
Weekday Afternoon: Club or Early Shift Job
Weekday Dusk: Late Shift Job or Walk
Weekday Night: Sleep
Weekends: Side Job, Club
Job Shifts and Clubs lasts only one time of day, but on weekends you cannot double the same day on one club.
We can now join two of the clubs at once and choose which one at club time. Only one club is required, though.
You can only have 1 Main and 1 Side Job. Side Job has to be manually taken and is not required. Losing any job lets you choose another in that time slot. It's possible to switch Main and Side, but Maid is weekday only and Bar is weekend only, additionally Bakery now requires a minimum corruption, as does the first Bar owner event. Yes, this means Maid is always the first job; this is to force Kate's availability.
As it stands, time management is a crunch. This way it's more fluid.
Quitting/being fired from the Bakery is going to be added once the convenience store job is finalized. More content with Kate on the corruption route is planned. Pink hair would be great, however, that'll be more work towards the CGs that will use it.
Threesome route won't be happening as that is an entire new route that we are not doing. As for the time management this is pretty close to what we originally wanted to do, but wound up keeping the early version for the opportunity of adding more locations the player can visit. Still we won't be altering it.
Still I'm glad that you've been enjoying what is there at least and your feedback is appreciated! I think you'll like the new content coming in the next update.
The way you said it sounds like each route is only maybe 1/3 of the way done or something. If so, isnt that too early to basically lose all of your frienships over who you're dating?
Also, after thinking about it, I still feel like Bar should be an optional weekend job but Bakery should only be unlocked after Cafe, and the Firing event should be unlockable after the zoo (or you can still date Kate and already know Lisa when at the zoo). It makes more sense for Cafe to lead into Bakery, both because Bakery is a corruption only job and because Kate joining the Bakery would make sense. But that's just me.
As for the pink hair thing, IF it's implemented as an alternative to blonde, I think the Club stuff should affect / be affected by that choice when it comes to dialogue. Since Cherry had pink hair dye.
But yeah, it sucks imo that we can't corrupt other girls into being with Matt too.
Just some thoughts I have after playing some playthroughs of the lastest free release.
In general, everything I played I liked it and I really liked how is Matt's characterization looking rn. I fell of my chair after he confronts the history teacher, I got so invested. Great. Amazing scene. I did love it. I think it suited him a lot.
I liked a lot the bullies too, btw. I am hoping we get more.
But there is some stuff I didn't liked as much. I think POV scenes feel weird. Regarding to Matt blowjob scene in the classroom and the Pet Play scene.
Most of the classroom scene now is in Matt's POV. I hope I am not the only weirdo that dislikes POV stuff. I can't get along with male pov stuff I guess because I am a girl so it makes me hard to to get into it, i guess?
Also, imo, I think it doesn't really suits the route. Since the character you play as is the one getting dom it feels weird to get the dom pov bc it kinda gives the player a dom position were I guess it would feel better if player had a observer position (no one's pov) like in the older version if you kinda want to appeal to everyone.
IMO, male POV fits better in male main character games. But AGAIN, I might be the weirdo here since I am seeing everything as I am a girl playing a girl in a sub position. I guess a male player that plays the route bc "he wants to have a sub girl" (let's leave there the player types) and gets into Matt's position would feel "better" having his POV.
You can't make everyone happy.
I prefer the older version of the blowjob scene, I also think art looked better in the older version. But in general, pretty good, I am very excited for the full release :D
Industry standard is $1 per minute for typing, normally, and one of your posts said $3 pays for 150 words, so I was wondering if it was based on the writer's WPM.
also who are all the ROs? not going to lie, I was kinda hoping that one teacher (i think the very first one you meet (not the principal)) was an option lmao
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Hello, I played the game and wanted to know if the black screens during the protagonist's dreams are on a black screen or is it just a bug on my cell phone or the images being something made for who is a subscriber?
Black Screens indicate scenes that haven't had CGs made for them yet. In the latest version the dreams have a cloudy background.
Thanks for the info
So, my girfriend who I recommended Uni to wanted me to ask if there will ever be a route for Levi from the Yearbook club. Tbh, I concur. He has big potential. And he already has a sprite. So, any ideas for him? Cheers
Levi won't have any lewd content sad to say.
would be sad to waste dev time on a cringe edgelord
Lol. You're only ever cringe if you only ever live according to others.
Levi being unapologetically true to himself and double downing on the dorkiness makes him a giga chad like no other.
Haven't made it through entirely yet, but hoping there are more lesbian options than I've gotten. Violet is an obvious option, but I'm hoping to get some lesbian scenes with Lisa, Olivia, and Tracy. Actually, any girl who has a unique appearance should have a lesbian option if I had my say, but that's probably not reasonable to ask for. But Lisa kept talking about how she likes someone who can take charge and then trying to get me to be less assertive. I'm hoping that showing her I can be dominant against her can get me some lesbian content, no manager involved. (Doesn't look like it though. I'll look up a guide after I've played through a time or two on my own to see how to get all the strictly lesbian content.)
If we had a route for every character with a unique sprite we'd never get this game finished. XD
Lisa is working to corrupt you for the manager which is why she is trying to make you more submissive.
I..I am in love with this game~!! but...is it necessary to hurt damien if I wanna continure with matt? idk, Damien is such a sweetheart. I can never TT and then there is Matt, why tf is he so hot? he is the devil fr fr ><
You'll wind up hurting someone if you try to pursue more than one person.
get help girl.
Is it possible to have a scene recall function in the future? Many galgames have this feature, and sometimes I don't just want to view the CG, I also want to revisit the dialogue that happened during those scenes. But currently, when I want to do this, I can only save the game at each scene, which is very inconvenient.
I'm an Android user, but there is no sound in the game.
There is music in my profile, but after loading the game there is no sound.
I think the problem is wearing earphones, but is there anyone who doesn't have a sound like me?
Outside of the main menu there is no music or sound.
Some H-Scene Replace they can be animated ready to watch
There's some fetish i would suggest Old man harasser contents for the city exploration dirty old man, strip club contents the female protag will be a whore she can accept money from people want H-scene,
Sex party at school CR that is really nice to see if the mc can do nasty things at CR
contain pregnancy?
No.
For pregnancy to be added in a reasonable degree of being grounded the game would be over before you'd see any physical changes. Plus, that would occur late into the game if we were to implement it.
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9 月将是下一次公开发布
If you do a certain side quest, you might be able to call in a favor. (You have to complete that before day 36 though, I believe).
Yell or Slap him in the beginning, or complete the karaoke walk around event before day 36.
You have walkthroughs? Guides?
There's one natively in version 0.46 (Net Corsair button on laptop in bedroom).
Is that why it wasn't working in 0.44? I have been trying to find a way to "turn on the internet" for a while now...haven't played 0.46
The native button is not retroactively available.
0.46 Guide:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oop9YfcGfvuYI_1vuKepCPmQho_jD6oGarY6rvw7xSQ
Would it be possible to have some more threesomes? I would love to offer Damien or Kate to Dom V., or pressure Sub V. into a threesome with either of them.
We won't be having intertwined route threesomes, but there will be more threesomes for sure.
will there be a way to date both violet and kate at some point? or will we just have to choose one?
love the game by the way, though I stuck strictly on the violet and kate routes, cuz well they're perfect
You'll have to choose one.
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question about violet route is romantic side mc do i play sub and dom to date here?
Both sides are romantic iirc
Out of the main routes, Kate and Violet are both perfect in completely different ways. Heck, same with Sub V. and Dom V; also, when you go drama you absolutely nail it. I wasn't expecting the "route blocks" and they really make you feel bad for your actions.
The athetic club sub route better end in a triangle polyamorous relationship of sorts (or at least a threesome) because damn the 3 of them are fucking great. Chelsea, Goth Girl and Sports Guy are great and have had ton of build up.
The brown girl from Kenzie clique is incredible hot. Love her design and pose.
You better be able to corrupt Olivia in the cheerleader group.
Also, fuck Matt. Even if you try to make his route as consensual as possible he still is a huge asshole.
Only real complaint is that some of the writing outside of the main routes can be quite a slog. The whole deal with the lady vendor and a lot of the yearbook stuff comes off as unnecessarily long and detailed. It just makes me wish it was time and effort spent in the better aspects of the game instead. Just my opinion tho, you guys know which are your priorities and what you want for the game.
agreed lets burn matt
Matt is loved by many and hated by many.
Hello bro i suggest some thrilling events like gangbang old man variants plus whore content the female protag must wearing such slutty outfit and student going to corrupt so much
Hi, Ive been having the issue that whenever i try running my most recent save from version 0.45 in 0.46 theres a game code error.
0.46 does not play well with previous saves due to the U.I changes.
fuck.. Matt's freacking hot, I been looking for something like his route for a long time. Just got up to the current end of his story and I'm not gonna lie it defenetly worth sacrificing my sleep before a long shift lol
waiting for the next update Q-Q
It shall come!
Is MC able to date Mr. Davis and have some romantic situations with him? I love this man, he's so caring and cute ^^ While he was helping MC with her photography skills there was clearly a tension between them. But he's not listed separately in the gallery with CGs, so I wondered if it's actually possible to have a romantic and maybe sexual relationship as well with him?
Also, do you already know when is the game going to be finished? Or is it too early to ask about that 😉?
Too early as there is quite a lot still needing to be done.
As for Mr. Davis you'll certainly have your chance.
Sure, I understand that 🙂
Oh, that's fantastic to hear! Hope I'm not the only person having a soft spot for him 😄💖
Keep up the good work, I've really enjoyed playing the demo version 👍
About Mr Davis. After Sofia's disappearance, I was getting the feeling that he would end up being the bad guy - or at least being the fall guy.
I hope neither will be the case.
So far, he's been really nice and been being just enough of a "surrogate dad" for MC.
I find your game very successful, there are a few I want to say, I think the cheerleader events in this game have great potential, I have not seen anything like this in any other game. For example, adding a few gangbang events would be very good and you could do this in the script as a way to motivate men.
Don't worry there will be gangbangs down the line. ;)
Most places in the United States have a drinking age of 21 so it doesn't ruin the immersion if you think of it like that
That's way too high to be believable. drunk teens is what US schools are known for. Just doesn't seem to add up.
I mean I live in the US and it's pretty accurate, even if people get drunk in school, it doesn't mean they'll just hand alcohol to minors in this country
Someone less than 21 can procure alcohol from a particularly lax convenience store, but most liquor stores and bars card pretty hard. If someone under 21 is caught in the bar or is able to purchase liquor from the liquor store (and state liquor authorities often hire underage people specifically to catch violating bars and stores), the bar or store will lose its license to sell alcohol, so they've got a strong incentive to self police. It's totally believable to me that Chelsea couldn't get in a club (especially a strip club) without offering an ... extra benefit.
I mean, why does it even matter?
Right. Imagine you've been legally drinking for 8 years. Than a character 4 years younger than you is considered 3 years to young.
It just really stops you in place and ask how the fuck does that make any sense,
Its a fictional game so, I sort of just really don't expect anything to be like societal norms, even if the drinking age was 30 it's its own setting, comparing these kinds of games to real life isn't really the way to go, if you didn't point it out I wouldn't have even noticed
The fictional nation this game takes place in adopts the legal drinking age of the United States. Which is 21 years old.
how long is this game ?
Depends on how fast you read but it's around 6 to 8 hours.
У меня вопрос: менч не загружает эротические сцены, для меня это просто черный экран, или я должен купить его в магазине, чтобы увидеть их?
может быть они не загрузили арты. ближе к концу чаще появляется просто текст, скорее всего сцены не готовы просто
а так игра бесплатна, разве что за подписку на патреоне быстрее обнову получаешь
Hearing for new updates for my beloved girlies Kate and Violet , I must wait patiently for them to be released in public!!!<3333
Things should be more stable around then too.
Decided to support for a month to get the update. Hope it will be worth it.
Thank you! I hope you enjoy it!
Love the game and looking forward to more updates, the violet route is great. Just wondering is there going to be anyway to get back kenzie later in the game?
There will!
Wanted to say that I'm waiting for new update I love this game so much
I enjoyed it a lot seriously thank you and I want to say that if it is possible can you adf more in violet route? And another question is that when will the next update comes out?This game is great.. I can't wait for new update
The next update will be on April 1st for Patrons.
The next public update will be a few months from now.
I've played this game a couple of times already but my Android phone is pretty bad and can't install the new version, is there a way to get any older versions of the game?
To save cloud space older versions get deleted since they're obsolete.
Have you deleted everything Uni related before trying to install a new version? I've heard that can help sometimes.
Yes I have tried deleting everything uni related but it seems like it doesn't help, guess I just have to upgrade my phone
Android is very difficult to address issues with since there are any number of reasons that can vary from phone to phone.
Wish we could help further.
How do you go down the Kate route? I only have the first 2 pictures of her in the gallery and i have no idea how to open the rest of them
Her Romance route is triggered by going down the cafe route, and not doing anything to advance the corruption route.
thank you
Okay, so I've mostly finished the current content (0.44 android). Here's my final thoughts.
I understand that you want to make the endings/routes monoamorous because it means you don't have to make as much content, but honestly the way this is done in game is unrealistic. Matt should be pushing you to corrupt the girls for him, not just ntring them; Violet's treatment of Kate is completely out of character - she hates assholes, not cutiepies, and the MC isn't allowed to even try to get both of them (and the dialogue is really weird for an MC played fully as polyamorous); and Matthew and Kate should at least be amiable. Instead, somebody is made into an asshole and the game forces mono-routes for future updates even though it's not even close to done yet.
The above is also a symptom of the main issue with the game, which is a lack of interconnectivity. Romance routes are kept mostly separate outside of breakups, clubs have no relationship with the rest of the story, bakery being disconnected from the rest of the city while the cafe route bounces around the city is weird, and the absolute obliteration of Matt makes any future content with Kenzie seem non-threatening.
Some other interconnectivity or logic problems:
1. As I said before, Bakery should come directly after Cafe, this is better for the story in multiple ways.
2. There should be an option to go undercover in the bar, instead of destroying all relationships.
3. As above, choosing a relationship destroys friendships completely.
4. Even if you don't let us join multiple clubs, we should still be seeing club members out and about.
5. As suggested before, time of day for clubs should not be the same as events.
6. There should really be hints for missing scenes.
7. How the heck did Violet clean the apartment and not find the dog collar?!
8. As an addendum to #1, Kate is too much of a central character to not be accessible just because you chose Bakery. Bakery doesn't give enough content to compensate for its restrictions.
9. If a straight A student can complete homework without changing time of day, why can't it be done at night?
10. Event dialogue doesn't recognize order of events. For instance, I got with Kate before Violet, but the dialogue suggested the opposite.
11. There should be a dom/sub hybrid option for Violet.
12. Don't let your dreams be dreams.
Now, on the flipside, there's some shining gems this game has that I love.
1. No animated scenes, so dev time isn't being wasted. That's good.
2. Mia's hairstyle changing... This is great and should be done with more characters.
3. The moms are the best moms.
And now for final suggestions/critiques:
1. Personality should be tied to class introduction and Matt response, not club.
2. Goth Club, or maybe Rock Club (with goths!)
3. Club 22 should be merged with Bar or Bar with Bakery or something. Honestly Bakery being the ring front makes more sense considering the Keith's moolah.
4. Breast implants ruin athletic ability, especially during recovery. This is really something that should be done at the end of the year once clubs are over.
5. Make Matt A Good Boy Redemption Arc
6. The Rent Is Too Damn High
Overall, a really good game, but ruined at the end when the cast turn into complete assholes regardless of prior growth.
You put so much effort into a comment review, and it is 100% correct.
Oh... Well, thank you.
I know I sounded a bit harsh, but I really did enjoy the game. I just feel it has some untapped potential.
Thank you for the thorough feedback. Really shows how much you care for the game!
While I'm not going to go over every single point, but there are good ones here outside of the ones that increase the scope of the game much further.
Thanks again for taking the time.
Just wanted to say that this game was awsome.... I enjoyed playing it seriously... I want more pls update this game as,soon as possible... Thx for this amazing game
Thank you for playing it!
More updates on the way!
Is rent supposed to be in 30 day or 4 week increments? I think it went day 30 then day 58 for me, so I'm confused.
Also, is the game supposed to go 10 months like a normal school year once finished?
Should be 30 days per rent.
That was the original plan, but we may wind up running a bit short of the full school year.
So I can guarantee that my second rent was on the 59th. Probably a bug.
Okay, so this is Review #1.
I absolutely love the game, so don't take it the wrong way that I'm only giving concerns this time; I just haven't done all content yet. I've so far gotten the corruption ending and then switched to Bakery route all endings, so far with Matt and Violet.
Firstly, I understand why you had the game end on day 75, but this stopped me from seeing side story scenes I hadn't unlocked yet. It's fine to freeze the calendar if necessary instead of ending the game.
On the corruption route, there should be the option to help the police by going undercover, this way you don't lose everyone yet and can still get more of the route's content with the consequences only happening down the line.
There should be an option to stay with Matt and actually quit the Bakery. That's a fourth option the dialogue suggests that isn't actually there, and the current option (to not get the surgery) counts as the normal bakery ending before triggering the Violet-Matt event. Another possible option is to pay for the surgery yourself, even in increments.
As for the Corruption path, there isn't enough interaction with Kate. Getting the firing event and begging for your job, or getting the job back, also seems to block Kate content.
Bakery Hair: Pink should've been an option tbh
Now for my big two issues:
First, I wanted to get a Matt-Violet-MC relationship. My ideal would be to get Violet to like Matt and/or get Matt to be a better person (redeem him with my sweetness), but corrupting Violet is fine too. The issue is that despite the MC seeing Matt be sweet sometimes, he's universally made into an asshole at the end, regardless of your route, and the game forces even Sub Violet to ruin his path (dangit!). I really, really don't like irredeemable bully characters; they're just bad writing (and The Fixer did the same thing too btw), especially for Matt since he was starting to soften up.
Second, the way time management is handled could be better. Try this instead:
Weekday Dawn: School
Weekday Afternoon: Club or Early Shift Job
Weekday Dusk: Late Shift Job or Walk
Weekday Night: Sleep
Weekends: Side Job, Club
Job Shifts and Clubs lasts only one time of day, but on weekends you cannot double the same day on one club.
We can now join two of the clubs at once and choose which one at club time. Only one club is required, though.
You can only have 1 Main and 1 Side Job. Side Job has to be manually taken and is not required. Losing any job lets you choose another in that time slot. It's possible to switch Main and Side, but Maid is weekday only and Bar is weekend only, additionally Bakery now requires a minimum corruption, as does the first Bar owner event. Yes, this means Maid is always the first job; this is to force Kate's availability.
As it stands, time management is a crunch. This way it's more fluid.
Quitting/being fired from the Bakery is going to be added once the convenience store job is finalized.
More content with Kate on the corruption route is planned.
Pink hair would be great, however, that'll be more work towards the CGs that will use it.
Threesome route won't be happening as that is an entire new route that we are not doing.
As for the time management this is pretty close to what we originally wanted to do, but wound up keeping the early version for the opportunity of adding more locations the player can visit. Still we won't be altering it.
Still I'm glad that you've been enjoying what is there at least and your feedback is appreciated! I think you'll like the new content coming in the next update.
The way you said it sounds like each route is only maybe 1/3 of the way done or something. If so, isnt that too early to basically lose all of your frienships over who you're dating?
Also, after thinking about it, I still feel like Bar should be an optional weekend job but Bakery should only be unlocked after Cafe, and the Firing event should be unlockable after the zoo (or you can still date Kate and already know Lisa when at the zoo). It makes more sense for Cafe to lead into Bakery, both because Bakery is a corruption only job and because Kate joining the Bakery would make sense. But that's just me.
As for the pink hair thing, IF it's implemented as an alternative to blonde, I think the Club stuff should affect / be affected by that choice when it comes to dialogue. Since Cherry had pink hair dye.
But yeah, it sucks imo that we can't corrupt other girls into being with Matt too.
Each character route is at the halfway mark right now.
Just some thoughts I have after playing some playthroughs of the lastest free release.
In general, everything I played I liked it and I really liked how is Matt's characterization looking rn. I fell of my chair after he confronts the history teacher, I got so invested. Great. Amazing scene. I did love it. I think it suited him a lot.
I liked a lot the bullies too, btw. I am hoping we get more.
But there is some stuff I didn't liked as much. I think POV scenes feel weird. Regarding to Matt blowjob scene in the classroom and the Pet Play scene.
Most of the classroom scene now is in Matt's POV. I hope I am not the only weirdo that dislikes POV stuff. I can't get along with male pov stuff I guess because I am a girl so it makes me hard to to get into it, i guess?
Also, imo, I think it doesn't really suits the route. Since the character you play as is the one getting dom it feels weird to get the dom pov bc it kinda gives the player a dom position were I guess it would feel better if player had a observer position (no one's pov) like in the older version if you kinda want to appeal to everyone.
IMO, male POV fits better in male main character games. But AGAIN, I might be the weirdo here since I am seeing everything as I am a girl playing a girl in a sub position. I guess a male player that plays the route bc "he wants to have a sub girl" (let's leave there the player types) and gets into Matt's position would feel "better" having his POV. You can't make everyone happy.
I prefer the older version of the blowjob scene, I also think art looked better in the older version. But in general, pretty good, I am very excited for the full release :D
The purpose of Matt POV was to show the MC's corruption. But yes, more MC POV would be great, especially Matt looking down at us~
Hizor, out of curiosity what is your WPM score?
Taking a 1 minute timed test:
"Speed is 45 WPM with 98% accuracy."
If this is in regards to writing I don't do the writing.
Industry standard is $1 per minute for typing, normally, and one of your posts said $3 pays for 150 words, so I was wondering if it was based on the writer's WPM.
Ah! No, we pay per word and that varies from writer to writer.
Oh, that's pretty cool!
is there or will there be a guide lol
Yes.
also who are all the ROs? not going to lie, I was kinda hoping that one teacher (i think the very first one you meet (not the principal)) was an option lmao
Oh Mr. Harvey? He will be eventually. :D
There's a few things that need to happen before his route gets worked on.
Woot Woot!! lol thanks.
Still waiting lol still great work and absolutely wonderful game, thanks for making it and sharing it!!
It's going to be after we release the 1.0 version of the game.
We could start work on it right now since the things that needed to happen have, but then we would be stretched too thin.
Is it still going to be updated ?
Yes it is.
When will the next update be?
April 1st on the Patreon.
How about a free update will there be one?
Most likely, yes, the public version will update over time based on the news posts. But patrons will get things first, always.
I just started playing this and damn this is so good! I love this AVN. You deserve all the support and love!
Thank you!